I've read it three times as well and can't really make head or tails of it. I have been going back in my mind trying to remember what happened. I know Ken and I talked about rewriting it; I know Ken rewrote it; I can only assume that either a: I didn't copy the new text into inDesign or b: copied it and failed to save.

Either way I'm 100% certain that gibberish is a result of my error. I apologize for the lack of professionalism.